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Ai wa Katsu 2
Love Wins Part 2
Koko wa Greenwood tankoubon 10, ep. 7, pp.151-175
(Mostly) translated by Imo-girl (asato@stanfordalumni.org)
Last Update 1/21/02
Please do not link directly to this translation. Thanks!
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My seventh translation. Corrections are welcome! Craved, even. ^_^;;
Warning: Not everything on each page has been translated. Also, some... creative... translating has occurred.
As always, thoughts are in (), my interjections and descriptions are in [], page breaks are marked by (*). |
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Mrs. Igarashi: [Addressing a young Igarashi] Miya. Will you run an errand for me?
Mrs. Igarashi: Tenma-kun, will you go with her?
Young Tenma: Sure.
Mrs. Igarashi: I'm so glad your family lives across from us. I can work without worrying.
Mrs. Igarashi: Miya-chan, be a good child, like Tenma-kun. Miya-chan, do you understand?
[Present day. Igarashi is staring off into space.]
Voice: Miya-chan!
(*)
Tenma: What's wrong?
Igarashi: N- nothing.
Tenma: The sun's gone down and it's gotten cold, hasn't it?
Tenma: Shall I carry that for you?
Igarashi: [Pulling her bag away] No– it's fine. I can do it.
Tenma: Mou! Recently you've been acting like such a stranger, Miya-chan!
Igarashi: [Angry] All I said was that I can carry my own things!
Old ladies: [Watching] Oh, look. They're so cute together. Etc.
Igarashi: (What will I do? What should I do?)
(*)
[Close-up of Igarashi's shocked face.]
Igarashi: (WHA–?)
(*)
[Hasukawa and Mitsuru are face-to-face with Igarashi and Tenma.]
Hasukawa: (Wha–?)
Tenma: [To Mitsuru] Sempai!
Hasukawa: (What is Igarashi-san doing here?)
Note: She's thinking: "Why is Hasukawa here?"
(*)
[Little superdeformed Hasukawas run around in his head in a blind panic.]
Superdeformed Hasukawas: Uwaa! Uwaa! Uwaaaaaa!
Hasukawa: (What'll I do? What should I do? It's so sudden!)
Hasukawa: (I wanted to see you.)
Hasukawa: (I wanted to see you again.)
Heart FX: doki doki doki doki doki doki doki doki doki doki
Hasukawa: (Yeah. I know that look.)
[Igarashi is staring.]
Hasukawa: (It's the face you make just before you start to cry.)
(*)
Hasukawa: (What. . .)
[Mitsuru and Tenma chat, unaware of what's going on.]
Mitsuru: So, Igarashi's mom is coming back?
Tenma: Yes. In September.
Tenma: It looks like she can stay for a while.
Tenma: Ah! Miya-chan! Did you thank him properly for his help?
Igarashi: Eh?! Uhhh. . .
Tenma: That's no good! You have to do it properly! Come on! Right now!
[Igarashi bows to Mitsuru.]
Igarashi: Please accept my apologies for what happened then.
(*)
[Igarashi and Hasukawa stare at each other.]
Tenma: [Noticing Hasukawa] Who's this?
Mitsuru: Our Dorm Head. Any thanks should be said to him.
Tenma: Oh. Is that so. . .
(*)
[Igarashi bows to Hasukawa while Tenma and Mitsuru watch.]
Igarashi: Sorry.
[Hasukawa stares at her silently.]
Tenma's voice: Well, see you.
Mitsuru's voice: Yeah.
(*)
Tenma: And a good New Year to you!
[Mitsuru waves.]
Mitsuru: (What a geezer.)
[Tenma looks over his shoulder, a suspicious look on his face.]
[Mitsuru and Hasukawa stand in the station in front of the ticket machines.]
Mitsuru: Well, shall I buy your ticket? 160 yen.
Hasukawa: . . . Sempai.
Mitsuru: Hm?
[Hasukawa's nose has started bleeding.]
Blood falling on the floor FX: Pota [plop]
(*)
Mitsuru: [Exasperated, holding out kleenex] Hey, cut it out! Tissue! Tissue! Don't use your hand.
Hasukawa: [Wiping his nose on the back of his hand] . . . Hempai, I . . .
Hasukawa: [Now using a kleenex] What should I do?
Mitsuru: What, huh? What can I say? I've never been in this situation. [sweatdrop]
Hasukawa: It feels like the inside of my head is filling up with blood. . .
Hasukawa: It hurts. I don't know why, but. . .
Hasukawa: I can't help but feel disappointed.
[Mitsuru, rather self-consciously, hugs Hasukawa.]
Mitsuru patting Hasukawa on the back FX: Pon Pon
(*)
[Old ladies are staring at Mitsuru as he embraces Hasukawa.]
Old lady 1: Ara! Isn't that Micchan from Kouryu Temple?
Old lady 2: Oh, what's he doing? And with another boy . . . [^__^;;]
Mitsuru: (Uh. Not good.) [sweatdrop]
[Mitsuru pulls Hasukawa into the relative privacy of a phone booth. Ads for escort agencies line the walls.]
Mitsuru: (I was just thinking that this is the kind of thing [kuchidashi ni sumai].)
Mitsuru: (Even though it's none of their business.)
[At the Hasukawa residence]
Sumire: Ara? Yakkun, your face is all red. Do you have a fever or something? You didn't drink your New
Year's sake.
Sumire: [Looking at a thermometer] Sure enough, you have a cold.
Sumire: It's no good. You have to stay home and sleep.
Sumire: I'll call Ikeda-kun's house and tell him you can't meet him for Hatsumoude like you promised. Come
on, go to bed. [Imo-girl: Hatsumode is the traditional first temple visit of the New Year.]
(*)
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[At the Ikedas' house. . .]
Mitsuru's voice: Ah, really? Yes, I understand. . . Well, tell Hasukawa "hi" for me.
[Mitsuru re-enters the room.]
Shinobu: What's wrong?
Mitsuru: She said he got a fever early on New Year's and he's sleeping.
Shun: Really?!
Shinobu: It's a rare man who gets an actual fever from lovesickness, isn't it?
Shun: Then, it's just the three of us for Hatsumoude?
[Mitsuru's mother pours sake for Shinobu.]
Mrs. Ikeda: Please have some.
(*)
Shinobu: [To Mitsuru] As expected, you also have a role to play in this problem.
Mitsuru: Are you saying you're going to help?
Shinobu: Don't make me laugh. I have no intention of helping him.
Shun: Suka-chan's such an idiot.
Shinobu: Omae mo mi mo futa mo nai na
Shun: [Angry] Look! I could understand about his sister-in-law! But would _you_ like to see him with
Igarashi-san?
Shinobu: You're awfully honest. But I see your point.
Mitsuru: But, y'know, there's a big difference between this time and that time with his sister-in-law.
Shun: Eh? What?
(*)
Mitsuru: *This* contest isn't decided yet.
[Sho is sitting at his desk thinking about Shun.]
Sho: (I heard what he said, but I really thought he was a girl.)
[Back at the Hasukawas' house]
Sumire's voice: Hiro-kun! Hiro-kun!
Sumire: [Excited] Look at this! It was in Yakkun's jeans pocket!
[Kzuhiro holds up an ad from the telephone booth.]
Ad: Lady Escorts! Safe! 03 (3XXX) XXXX
Kazuhiro: (What's he learning in Uguisudani?!) [sweatdrop]
Sumire: The other side! The other side!
Kazuhiro: Other side?
[Kazuhiro turns the ad over.]
Kazuhiro: [Surprised] !
(*)
[Hasukawa lies in bed.]
Hasukawa: I still have the constitution of a baby, huh?
Note: He has a fever.
Hasukawa: (. . . that's right. Igarashi-san lives in that area. It's not unusual to run into her at Uguisudani
station.)
Hasukawa: (If I go to Hatsumoude, I might meet her again.)
Hasukawa: (Maybe with *him*.)
[Hasukawa imagines Tenma's smiling face.]
Tenma smile FX: NIKO
Hasukawa: Ugh!
Hasukawa: (D- dammit!!)
Note: His fever is rising.
(*)
Hasukawa: (Why, when you like someone, does your heart have ups and downs like this?)
Hasukawa: (It's a lie when they say love is strong.)
Knocking FX: Bosu bosu
Kazuhiro's voice: Kazuya.
[Kazuhiro stands in the doorway to Hasukawa's room.]
Kazuhiro: We're going to have lunch. Can you eat?
Hasukawa: I'll eat.
Hasukawa: . . .
[Kazuhiro turns to go.]
Hasukawa: Hiro-nii.
Hasukawa: There's something I want to ask you.
(*)
[Kazuhiro stands with tears streaming down his face.]
Kazuhiro: (It's been so long! Oh, how I've waited for this day . . . etc.)
Hasukawa: Suppose if. . .
Hasukawa: . . . when you met Sumire-chan she already had a guy she liked? What would you do?
Kazuhiro: This isn't really a hypothetical situation is it? You're no liar.
Hasukawa: I said, just suppose!
Kazuhiro: What do you mean, "what would I do?" In other words. . . ?
Hasukawa: I mean –
Hasukawa: Even though you like Sumire-chan, she has someone else she likes. And furthermore, they've
been together forever.
Note: The truth is, if that were the case, nothing would have happened between Sumire-chan and
Hasukawa's older brother.
Kazuhiro: If that's the case. . .
(*)
Kazuhiro: Would I give up?
Kazuhiro: If it's me, no matter the conditions, my answer is the same.
Kazuhiro: If the guy is careless, even if he's better than me, I wouldn't give in whatever history they share.
Even if he were my own little brother, I wouldn't take pity on him.
Kazuhiro: Sometimes you think too much about unnecessary things. Didn't you spend enough time in
contemplation during the Physical Education Festival? [Imo-girl: tankoubon 10, episode 1.]
Hasukawa: . . . !
Hasukawa: [Blushing] This problem is completely different!
Hasukawa: This isn't just about me!
Hasukawa: The girl and the other guy might get hurt. . .
Kazuhiro: Wrong. You don't worry about the other guy, dummy.
(*)
Kazuhiro: You shouldn't be too afraid of being the bad guy.
Hasukawa: Really. . .
Kazuhiro: I'm a pro at giving life advice, so I'm not mistaken.
Hasukawa: (Maybe so. . .)
Kazuhiro: However, if you think about it, you're already encroaching unavoidably on someone else's
territory: you can't give up on liking his girlfriend.
Hasukawa: (After all, I was just afraid of getting hurt, myself.)
Hasukawa: (Even though the answer was there.)
Kazuhiro: I'll tell you another thing.
Kazuhiro: If you're dumped immediately, no one but you gets hurt.
(*)
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Kazuhiro: They say "evil will be destroyed."
Kazuhiro: If that happens, even if finding out is unpleasant, it's decided. But–
Kazuhiro: If it's not destroyed, maybe it's not evil. [Imo-girl: He means "If you're not dumped, maybe you're
meant to be together."]
Kazuhiro: That's for the girl to decide later.
Kazuhiro: So, her name's Igarashi-san, huh?
Hasukawa: [Blushing] How do you know that name?!
[Kazuhiro holds out the ad Sumire found.]
Kazuhiro: I just happened to see this. This is *that* meddler's handwriting, isn't it?
On the back of the ad: Igarashi 3872-XXXX
Hasukawa: (He's very conservative.)
(*)
Hasukawa: (His "Go sign" shook me.)
Hasukawa: (Anyway, I'm going to let Igarashi-san know my feelings! Everything starts with that!)
Hasukawa: [Psyching himself up as he stands by the phone] All right, then!
Kazuhiro: (How long is it going to take for him to make a simple phone call? Sheesh.)
Hasukawa: (I have to do it or nothing will begin or end.)
Hasukawa: (Here we go!)
[Hasukawa dials.]
Phone ringing FX: Tsu tsu tsu
Hasukawa's heart FX: DOKI DOKI DOKI DOKI
(*)
Voice on the other end: Hello, Igarashi residence.
Hasukawa: Ah! Um! May I speak to Miya-san, please?
Voice: Speaking, but. . .
[Cut to Igarashi]
Hasukawa's voice: Igarashi-san? It's Hasukawa. Ah– Um– I–
Hasukawa's voice: I have something I want to talk to you about.
(*)
Igarashi: [Panicking] SORRY!
[Igarashi hangs up.]
Hasukawa: A! Igarashi!
Kazuhiro: Well, *that* happens, too. . . [sweatdrop]
Narr: Is it okay to end with this kind of helpless scene?! Is it fate from a past life or the track coach's curse?
Where is Hasukawa Kazuya's spring?!
Hasukawa FX: Doooooooooooo!
Arrow pointing to Hasukawa FX: This is the sound in his heart.
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